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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
very heartfelt

Arousing yet warm with people not porn stars. Good job :D

RoyalBabyGirlRoyalBabyGirlalmost 9 years agoAuthor
Re: very heartfelt

Thank you, darlin. Conner and I are very real as are our experiences and feelings for one another. (:

It's very difficult to write sometimes (between emotions, fuzzy memories and writer's block) but, at the same time, I love being able to memorialize our relationship and share a little bit of it with the world. ♡

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Wow

Very nicely written. Your Dom sounds as much lover as he does Dom but he also sounds fabulous. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Proofread

Very good story, but proofread. A few errors I recall in spelling and another being that the guy's name changed from Connor to Cameron and back to Connor. Keep writing!

ShadowRosieShadowRosiealmost 5 years ago
She's a woman

She's not a good girl. She's a woman with womanly needs.

RoyalBabyGirlRoyalBabyGirlover 4 years agoAuthor
re: She's a Woman

She doesn't need you to tell her who she is. (:

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