All Comments on 'Pushing Boundaries Ch. 03'

I'm loving this story,can't wait for the next update :) just be careful with the use of 'am' when you should use 'I'm'

Five.

I really love this story, and i don't want to critique grammar because my own grammar sucks. But it has to be "I am" or "I'm" not just "am". sorry to be annoying, but otherwise the story is great

I hope she give in just a little. Please hurry back!

Can't wait to read more =)

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love in the house

I couldn't believe that another kid attacked David the way that he did and had the nerve to say it was a joke...right. As for Dee she just might as well give in and go for it. She is very attracted to her childhood friend and he is definitely attracted to her. This story reminds me of Love and Basketball. Thanks

Keep up the good work. I'm really looking foward for the next chapter.

Editor please, story would be ok, but multiple errors can be distracting, you keep leaving out the letter I before the am

I'm sure you're familiar with the old rule that 'I' comes before 'am'? It's simple Primary level grammar I believe. Sorry to be critical but it does become irritating, I am loving the story though :)