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"Don't get to handsy or I'll cut them off." Deina said without even opening her eyes or moving an inch. Hopefully that sent a message.
"Way to ruin a moment Dee. I just want to hold you. Maybe that way I can get some sleep. Now rest babe we have to get up early to go jogging." Her soft groan tickled him and two seconds later he could hear her rhythmic breathing of a peaceful sleep.
His body finally felt weary and settled. The beating pace of her heart beat lulled him to sleep. There was no turning back, some how he knew Deina in his bed pushed past sometime of boundary with them and he hoped she felt it too.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousalmost 11 years agoI'm sure you're familiar with the old rule that 'I' comes before 'am'? It's simple Primary level grammar I believe. Sorry to be critical but it does become irritating, I am loving the story though :)
Anonymousalmost 12 years agoEditor please, story would be ok, but multiple errors can be distracting, you keep leaving out the letter I before the am
Anonymousover 13 years agoKeep up the good work. I'm really looking foward for the next chapter.
Anonymousover 13 years agoI couldn't believe that another kid attacked David the way that he did and had the nerve to say it was a joke...right. As for Dee she just might as well give in and go for it. She is very attracted to her childhood friend and he is definitely attracted to her. This story reminds me of Love and Basketball. Thanks
