All Comments on 'Pushing My Boundaries Ch. 02'

"Pussy mussels" does not bring the sexiest image to mind.

Yes, an editor might help a little. But the little scene you just described was just fine with the 'pussy mussels' as the wording seems to catch the moment of frantic sexual activity. You have some interesting adventures, so please keep writing

You need to work on your grammar and spelling. Your storyline is not believable. You leave out details that could help your story.