by svenjolly
It's funny to think about now, but I made the comment after reading your first chapter that it was perfect as is. So now after reading the complete saga, I see just how narrow a comment it was. I have made friends with all your characters and shared in their adventures. Well done!
Great story! Story development was good. Sex scenes were a bit short though.
Thanks for writing it
read every chapter! great! good characters, horny sex...good story!! it was too soon to stop, you should continue with them...
I just love your stories. They have that something extra, a humane quality about them, that is perfectly endearing- though, of course, they make for hot reading, too. Keep up the good work, you really have something unique going.
Hot and steamy at times, great characters and an evolving story line. I really liked the way the characters grew throughout the story. You never did tell about his sister and her family coming to visit though. A lot of interesting possibilities in that situation. Thanks for the great story, 5 stars all the way
Too soon to stop. Anyway, a good story, good storyline and characters with just the right amount of drama. Thanks, I really appreciate both the romance and the happy ending....well, hopefully it isn't ended yet!
I love your writing style. You have yet to dissapoint. Hope you keep at it.