by julybear7
why bother with all the excessive details? It ended up being just a slightly above average five minute letter to penthouse forum by the end. It's still about a ton better than the typical swill that flows around here, but, you have done better.
This is the fantasy of a somewhat educated woman, who is a decent writer, but the story of the youthful dumb cluck and the beautiful cougar is semi-palatable only. He is just too stupid for words. Then there is the chorus of 4 naked neighbors. Ha! Still, more intelligent than most of the stuff here.
That's a hell of a great story and very well written. Your attention to details is terrific. THANKS!
I've read a few of your other stories and certainly read more.