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by tristantrotsky

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Pretentious Crap

This is overwritten, clichéd, pretentious crap. Cut all the flowery bull and just tell the story.

It might also help to listen to how people actually talk. Your dialogue is ridiculous. Hunan beings just don't talk like that.

Staining the air?

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