All Comments on 'Pyaasi Bhabhi Pt. 01'

by softdominant699

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Anonymousalmost 9 years ago

unrealistic... but brings out the wildest fanatasies inside.... like a cheap porno..Heh!..

witing for more ...

Anonymousalmost 9 years ago

False advertisement

The description was in English, which implied the story was in English. Uh uh. You want to publish your story in your native tongue? Fine, by all means do so, but be honest about it.

softdominant699 almost 9 years agoAuthor

I'm Sorry about that... This is my first time on literotica. And I explained the moderators about writing my native language in english. . . . . . . . Although I'm writing up stuff in english as well. Hope you like it.. Thanks for the mention... cheers!!

Anonymousalmost 9 years ago

Came almost three times while reading this shit!!!

keep up the good work

maakaloda almost 9 years ago

bahut hi garam bhabhi hai yaar

Anonymousover 8 years ago

Awesome

Great story..... Shame it had to be put in English section to be seen....... Keep up the good work.... Gonna read and comment on the other ones .

Anonymousalmost 6 years ago

I could not understand a single word. HOWEVER any story where bhabhi seduces her devar deserves at least a 4+ (4.4). When the bhabhi is DEVIANT & her devar is NAIVE, the story gets 5 stars (*****)!

I meant every word i said in the subject line. I was not joking. Actually, I BELIEVE OUR MAKER CREATED BHABHI & DEVAR FOR A REASON; LIFE CAN BE ROUGH & THEY ARE MEANT TO HELP EACH OTHER IN MORE WAYS THAN ONE. A bhabhi is ideally suited to teach her devar how to fuck (pardon my language).

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