by HotSprings22
The shit just got real chapter!!! This is one of my favorite stories of all time and this chapter is a personification of why. Jasmine got what was coming and I hope a wonderful future for them both.....
This is one of my favorite stories on Lit. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
If this was the last chapter, I am ok with it. Glad he didn't fall for nasty Jasmine and saw through her scheme (who keeps a box of old condoms and thongs?).
The story and particularly this chapter was sweet and hot at the same time. They both admitted their love for one another and she came out of that bathroom fighting and I don't think he will be participating in any more threesomes anytime soon.
If there is another chapter and Jasmine does something else, she deserves a beat down. Great ending for this chapter. Thanks!
talk about hot!!! i loved it and I hope it isnt the end of the story.
As much as I love your stories, get an editor, your stories could be so much better.
I can’t believe I almost missed this story, I love it! I spent most of my morning catching up on this series. These two are just so cute and sizzling together. You are by far one of my favorite authors are here now!
I can't believe I missed this update and it was a great one too happy to see everyone now knows that they're really together hope there's another update to come thanks!
This story was tooooo fucking hott! I read all of them just now... ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!
Keep up the good work,
-Bizzy
I agree, I could totally go for an epilogue. I really enjoyed the story. -DC
The first time they had sex was freakin' hot. Loved how she took control considering who she is. It is a great read. Everything about this story had me hooked. I don't think I would have been as easily forgiving when he got caught. I mean, it didn't take much for him to get tempted by Ms. pop tart. Anywhoo great writing. Thanks for sharing your gift for writing. More please =) and good luck with your success..
This was incredible...reading this had me so wet. Even though you had a couple of grammar problems it was still wonderful...waiting on the epilogue
I thought they were gonna break up :3 thanks for the story I enjoyed it very much(:
The love was heartfelt, but the sex was EXPLOSIVE! Whew! I think I got wet a couple of times. Especially the scene at the football field! Keep the stories coming and I will keep reading them. Just watch the grammatical errors!:)
Thanksgiving is in a couple of days. I want to say that I am thankful for you. I've been lurking and reading literotical for a few years.Your story was the first I ever commented on. Every since chapter one I have always "gasped and moaned as if I was gaylen. There have been many times that I have read this story over and over and wish I could find a man like hers. Gosh.... I'm getting hot just thinking of the possibility. Your writing is one in a million. if it was published I would have the hardcover and paperback (for traveling) version. I absolutely love you, and I wish I could give you a hug. Thank you for giving me hope
This is one of the first interracial stories that I have read that made me entirely connect with the characters. I loved this story through every chapter. Thank you for bringing this to the table.
This was an absolutely exceptional story. There were, indeed, some grammatical issues (more in the earlier chapters), but that is plenty overlookable considering the quality of everything else involved. And being a white guy who has a taste for chocolate pussy, I was throbbing all the way through! Five stars.
I hope this is not the end chica. I want to see if he marries her and he gets drafted to the NFL and rubs it in Jasmine's face! I hope they have babies, little AJ! LOL
I think you should just leave it there. It is like the perfect ending; enough to keep you satisfied but also allows you to let your imagination run as to what their ending is going to be.
More please, let's see the buddy fall head over heals for a girl who would rather play the field!
I had read the 1st version of this chapter and I liked it SO much more, but if you felt the need to change it, all I can do is agree. Still, I was waiting for the moment that Jasmine got outed by Galynn so I could go, "Take that skank!" but you took it from me :(
This ending is a bit ridiculous: she just choose to believe that lie and then it is it? She calls her mom?? I hate when a character is made to behave so stupid !!! It is such a cliché!!!!
I'm only halfway through the first page and from the comments I see here, I'm feeling like I should just skip to chapter 8. What the hell happened? I have the ability to place myself in other people's shoes, so I feel nervousness that Galynn would feel. I'm scared to move forward.