All Comments on 'Queen'

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TJSkywindTJSkywindalmost 8 years ago
Variation

Interestingly done variation, adding in the sexual element with mind control on the part of the egg/pod. I like the Kevin McCarthy version of Invasion of the Body Snatchers better than the Donald Sutherland version. I like rooting for the home team.

To paraphrase Mr. Brooks -- "It's good to be the Queen."

OzytronOzytronover 7 years ago
Perfecto

This story is just so gotdamn tight. It drove me crazy without even touching myself. Hnngh.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Sequel

One way you could continue this is showing what happens after the queen dies. Perhaps one of the others will start laying eggs.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Male drones

You should make another chapter, where she takes the males of the city.

iPwn6SiPwn6Sover 5 years ago
Amazing

It all began with a mysterious egg in a package. I enjoyed this

ComfyCow69ComfyCow69almost 4 years ago

This is fab! Great descriptions of the egg laying itself, and the gradual TF (as in your other stories) is perfect.

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