by msound1
Interestingly done variation, adding in the sexual element with mind control on the part of the egg/pod. I like the Kevin McCarthy version of Invasion of the Body Snatchers better than the Donald Sutherland version. I like rooting for the home team.
To paraphrase Mr. Brooks -- "It's good to be the Queen."
This story is just so gotdamn tight. It drove me crazy without even touching myself. Hnngh.
One way you could continue this is showing what happens after the queen dies. Perhaps one of the others will start laying eggs.
You should make another chapter, where she takes the males of the city.
This is fab! Great descriptions of the egg laying itself, and the gradual TF (as in your other stories) is perfect.