by AlinaX
The story was well written, even though it could have been longer and more detailed, and it was a good story. I personally enjoyed it but I think that a lot of people do not enjoy this sort of stuff. But regardless, it is objectivley an OK story in all and I'm the end it is what you want to write
Thank you all for your comments... :-)
This story's fairly different in the way that it's undesired body transformation without gender transformation, and overall even the eroticism is mostly unwanted. But I agree that it is too short, especially for the number of characters involved.
I especially enjoyed the way you as a woman tried to get into men's heads (and cocks haha). It goes both ways.
This is one of those great stories that is not going to be to many people's taste.
A bit short.
Late to this party, but.... I loved this! How it ended was epic! Thanks for sharing