by L.A. Wicker
give us another chapter or two.i'm not a writer,but i like to read good fuck stories.you write them real good.thanks from a reader and keep writing.
LA You are really a fine writer. Please continue the story. I can see at least one or two more chapters. Some people aren't happy if the story has complicated words, you know more than 4 or 5 letters. Keep up the good work.
Okay trinity is the aunt- whose sister? I did not pick up any relationships - Or did I miss
MY GOD LA, you can't possibly be "CRUEL" enough to leave us hanging now that you have given us a taste of one of the best incest stories on here.. It's hot, sexy, lustful, and romantic. More of it Please LA!!!!!!!
Paul
Give me a while. I'm doing about five things at once. a month or so, maybe...
that was one of the hottest stories I've read, though I must confess I skipped the father-daughter part (not my thing)
I hope that it's Barb who move in with Trinity and Ken. Best way to avoid being noticed.
Story was very nice, I would have liked maybe one more scene with ken and trinity but overall it was great, keep it up.
Holy crap! That was the hottest thing i ever read.... we need a threesome of trinity and his mom!
would also like to see another chapter featuring all 3. I too skipped the daddy daughter side-line. the main story had plenty of movement. the next chapter could expose a past between the mother and aunt which rolls forward into a incestuous threesome.
WOuld love to see more with trinity and ken... liked the mom part although would like to see either a three some, or some more hot sex between trinity and ken maybe off on the ranch somewhere unexposed to the mom... overall awesome..... write another for me!!!!
L A - you really are a fabulous writer - please give us some more of these three characters - maybe Mom will decide to stay and Ken can keep them both happy - Maybe a new chapter down the way when Dad and his daughter decide to visit the Aunt's ranch - Wouldnt that be awesome - a 5some
You really develop the lead-in and sex itself very well. Probably the toughest thing to really include a lot of detail on are the orgasms. While you did the female ones wonderfully, it seemed like the guys just 'happened.' I'm not slamming it, but just saying describe the guy cumming in the same detail as the woman's: describe his build-up, ejaculation and how she feels in receiving it.
PART THREE CAN BE FOUND AT, http://storiesonline.net/auth/LA_Wicker
That's fucking HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT HOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!
keep it cumming please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
he best not leave his aunt...just have mom sell the home and the three of them live on the ranch...i for one would die happy knowing i had a hot mom and aunt that love to fuck..and the sisters would love each other as well.as lovers