by Niteshadow
Incredible!!! This story seems to be more than imagination, it was so incredibly real you would think it actually was something the writer experienced in real life.
It SISSLED for me!! Hope to read more from you.
There are stories and then there are stories. From the numerous story submissions I have read this one really held my attention. The staging of the story moved very well and fluent. For me it made me feel as if it was me in the story---when that occurs that's what makes a very good writer. Hope theirs more submissions from you soon
Please write more of your story. I just loved this. let me know when your write more. My E-Mail Add is mloya2@yahoo.com. Post me when you do add to the story.
Its been along time since I've felt this type of physical thrill. I've read so many stories, this one made me tingle and throb. Spelling in areas could use a little work, however, I'm totally alive inside and out with the story.
IN fact that did happin to me. My mom and I made love for over three years.
Second time around for this one. This time I really listened to the frustration the Mom and Grandma must have felt all the previous WASTED years. And what caused it? Piety...religous dogma run amuk! Ok..it is fiction. But religous tyrany is not! I am a believer, but not in the God that would condemn the very thing HE created...sex. I don't think that that is the case or has ever been the case. My philosophy? Life is just too Goddamn short! So enjoy it...COMPLETELY! Nice job Nite...
I just loved the first two pages and the sex between mother and son. But the ending with the young boy wasn't that good in my opinion.
You have a real talent for building up a story - really well done. Agree with others that a spell check would be helpful - but I read through to the end. Try writing other stories, not just erotic - you are good enough
I liked this story, it got me hot, really really brought me to such a state of arousal. More
Even if she wants it, do more to keep her yours. It always ends this way, now shes a slut. And the son will lose her.Too bad but it happens. Good read sad ending..LAROC OF AGES
It's great of course when a boy sticks his young cock up his own mother's mommy-hole, the same wonderful hole between his mother's legs that he came into the world from. He feels the unique joy of unloading his hot young balls up his own birth canal, and his mother feels the joy of having her darling baby boy back up where his life began, now filling her full of his creamy sperm. But once a mother spreads her legs for her son, her cunt should be reserved for her boy alone, even cutting off dad if he's still in the picture. Just as the boy's fine fat prick should be reserved for his beloved mommy. A mother's wet twat and her boy's stiff cock--the perfect match.
Sat in my hot tub horny as hell, brings back memories of my own mother watching me masterbate she thought I didn't know!!!!
very good story. i would have given you 4 stars instead of 3 but you need an editor or learn to spell and study word usage. keep writing you can only get better.