by CruelLines
Very well written. It reminds me of me and my ex girlfriend. I won't tell you who is who though. ;)
This is what sensual sadism is all about. You have a way with words that is delightful.
You captured my heart and loins with this story; you're descriptive and powerful.
Thanks to you guys who take the time to comment, rate, give feedback, etc. It's really appreciated, and I'm glad this story's found an audience. I know it's not to everyone's taste, so it's nice to make that connection. Thanks again, CL.
What a marvellous, thrilling read. Real love shown through the beauty of BDSM
That was beautifully well written! Fisting isn't my thing, but that didn't stop this story from captivating me in more ways than one. I loved the dynamic between the two characters as well. It's nice to see a story with two female characters where the pleasure is about them and not some guy, and it's nice to see a bdsm story where the submissive has activly participated in preparing the scene. Stories like this are what I was looking for when I came to this site.
Poetically written and tantalizing, every second of it!! Will be sharing this with my Mistress!!!
Well written and HOT! I especially like the use of blackout contacts which I use on my slut in public.