All Comments on 'Quickie: Corporate Benefits'

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SoNaughtySoNaughtyabout 6 years ago
WOW! Great story!

You made me so horny reading this! Keep up the great work! Love your stories!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
What

a rushed and weak ending!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Where do I get an employment application?

Rushed ending but well done! Is the company hiring?

Timtom12Timtom12almost 6 years ago
So in depth

I really thought there was gonna be some twist at the end.

The last page or so wasn't very well proofread.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Sequel?

I'd love to see a sequel with a female employee of the company as the star. She would need a release of tension and could choose from male and female massueses (or have both at once).

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I kept expecting the analysis choice to have a surprise ending

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

I couldn't count ALL of the mistakes on Page 1!!!

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Jason and Liz enjoy writing stories together. Liz helps out with the female perspective, Jason puts it all together. Hope you enjoy reading as much as we did writing.

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