All Comments on 'Quicksilver Messenger Pt. 07'

Excellent example of dominance and subspace.

...aren't representative of everyone. You've got a good start and the best way to get better is to keep cranking out work. There are a few typos here and there which can be cleaned up, but over all your grammar is fine. The story itself.... well I started with this chapter. I need to go back and read, then I'll comment on content.

I like your story a lot. It has the right mixture of sex and character developing. Keep it up!

I read this a couple weeks ago, scored it a 5 and favorited it and just now found that both were not recorded. Something wrong with this site! This is the seventh. This sucks.