All Comments on 'Quincunx Ch. 03'

Don't make us wait too long for the next chapter in a hot little love story!

Just a couple if little things. Some minor spelling mistakes. And a minor point if anatomy.... Women don't have an Adam's apple.... On the whole a great story. Look very much forward to seeing where you go with it

Great story love it and to previous poster everyone has an adams apple just harder to see with woman

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Honestly, the spelling in this story has been more than adequate by literotica standards. Bad spelling/grammar has ruined many stories for me here, but I'm having no trouble with this one.

Women do have adam's apples. They're just smaller and less noticable.

My biggest complaint is the term "hunny hole". I really just hate that.