by alexcarr
A nice idea, but not enough descriptive or thought-provoking wordage to be truly erotic.
You should spend a little more time doing that and less talking about the size of your penis.
And, on the subject of appendages, when you wrote"She is the proud possessor of a nice sexy slim appendage", what appendage were you talking about? Most women don't have such a thing that seems to be what you're describing. Did you mean something other than "appendage"?