All Comments on 'Quite a Ride'

hot. probably a common fantasy. who's Geoff? looks like another run through with proofreading would catch that mistake.

Very nice, very hot! great attention to detail.

Although it was obviously written by a woman - almost no men would pay that much attention to her outfit and accessories. :)

This story is excellent. Articulate with erotic excitement building to a fulfilling climax, just as sex and life should occur. Thanks.

That was a lovely story. The descriptions were good... helped me imagine the whole thing in quite some detail. The idea and the way it was narrated was great. Keep writing. :)

A fun read. Now why weren't my subway rides ever like this? Although one time I experienced what I assumed to be a lot of inadvertent bumping. But true to the rules I did not look at her until I was on the platform...she smiled at me through the window. Coulda, shoulda, woulda.

This story is simply oozing sensuality. The detail, the way you are able to transform a common situation into a uniquely erotic one, without being crass or unaware of the limitations of the situation. I specifically like the part about people watching each through reflections in the window, I've done it so many times before. And then to add a little twist at the end, when so many other people finish their stories with the climax, shows that you thought the story completely through. Exactly, what I look for on this site.

Just enough of everything.

and I'm just a girl who rides the train...

Beautifully written, and hottest story I've read so far!I loved the end scene! Good! Keep up the good work!

Loved this story! Great leadup, emotion, and climax.

i liked this one :) There are many ways to love. To do it without care, leaving only sex, withers the soul. so the invitation was the clincher here for me. Yoron.

One of my long-standing fantasies: "Strangers on a Train"

It was nicely detailed, well told with delicious anticipation.

Keep up the good work.

Simply a wonderful tale. Beautifully written no matter what the sex of the author!

Love how you capture the excitement of the delicate initial touches, with the ever-present danger of being caught.