by RejectReality
Very very good. I liked Charlotte as the director; she moves the action on just right. And you left it where you could do more but I was satisfied that it ended. You write good sex.
Love to be in on that. I would love to clean them all up as much as they liked.
Yes, this story ticked a lot of my boxes. Charlotte is a mischievous imp and the way she ran the show was interesting. I would have liked a bit more F/F/... play, but there's always hope for a sequel. :)
Pedantic bonus points for your slick prose and thorough edit. Well done. I'll have a look at your tasty forum thumbnails more often.
I'm surprised the men had the strength to get up and walk out. I would've been passed out on the floor!
Enjoyed this story, well paced and kept me interested, be nice to have a continuation with Charlotte being able to join in more
Great story very well packed and very well told. Ty ty ty
Ch2 in the works? Seems wendy has a debt to repay to charlotte
One of the hottest things I've ever read. Anywhere, anytime.
Brilliantly realistic.
Your understanding of multiple orgasms, is beyond any writer I've ever come across.
The knowledge of the dehydrating effects of a gushing pussy, how the orgasms roll into continual waves. The aftershocks.
Pure descriptive brilliance.
Easily a favorite.
I would give this 12 stars, if I could.
Absolute perfection!
Excellent story with great characters, beautifully paced, and very erotic! Definitely one the best stories on this site! Please consider writing a sequel (or a series). Thank you!
Perhaps the author's best story, this one is Five Stars all the way. It would be wonderful if the story of Wendy could be continued.