All Comments on 'Quitting Time: At The Ice Rink'

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acerdriveacerdriveover 14 years ago
OOOoooo nice!

My friend, that was very good in my own opinion. you were able to get good details and it was amazing thought out. though I think maybe you should add more to this and make some extensions and make it into a small series. I'd love to see the whole Amy situation, maybe have Amy and Michelle get with him. very good. keep it up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Pretending

This is strange, an actress that doesn't like pretending. Acting is all about being a liar, they love it. All actresses are born liars, need to delete or fix the story so it's more realistic.

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Hey, Name's MeanBlackjack but I tend to prefer Blackjack. That username was taken thought so it'll have to do ;) I enjoy writing celebrity erotica and I have recently branched out into video game erotica and normal people erotica. I enjoy RP so feel free to get in contact...

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