All Comments on 'Rabbit Trails'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Bunny wishes

How this little bunny wishes she could find a Daddy like the one in this sweet story. Truly enjoyed the read and will be reading it again for inspiration. Hope you write more soon. Like your literary style and use of prose.

AbastAbastover 6 years agoAuthor
So happy you enjoyed it!!

I had not planned to write more on the story, worried the days may drone on. With help from my Daddy i may though. Thank You so much for commenting and voting, i really appreciate it. Will try to get more stories out soon! :) Thanks again!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Lol negative comments deleted?

Not everyone can take negative feedback, I guess.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Not sure how

To my knowledge comments can not be deleted. As an all adult site i believe we all just depend upon each other to be respectful and responsible. True, i would rather have a negative comment sent directly to me rather than to have it perminantly set here but as a new writer the help of more experienced writers would be greatly appreciated.

In summary no, there have not been any comments deleted. Hope that answers your question Anonymous 2.

moodydudemoodydudeabout 6 years ago
Build up

Love how you built up and pulled me into the story.

I want a part two.

somewhatnew2008somewhatnew2008over 5 years ago
5 stars

Great story! I hope to see where their adventure goes next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
So in love

More please

_Stealth_Stealthover 5 years ago
nice work

Abast,

Very hot story. Should keep the story going.

chickmagnetchickmagnetalmost 5 years ago
Good first attempt

Great story well written and paced. Not hard to keep up with and the characters seem realistic for the subject matter 5*

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