All Comments on 'Rachel's Daddy'

by Soft1017

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ariesgirlariesgirlalmost 10 years ago

Good written story but Daddy kind of forced himself on Rachel and treated her like he was making a deal to hire her as his mistress in the beginning.

MADISONKAIMADISONKAIalmost 10 years ago

This is different from what I am use to from you. I am not enamored with it, but I am glad to see you back writing and I hope to see even more from you in the near future. You were on a very long hiatus.

Soft1017Soft1017almost 10 years agoAuthor
This was actually a commissioned story

Thanks for the comments :).

I wrote this and Kali's Daughter under commission for a publishing company. At the last minute I decided to become an independentauthor and I never submitted them. They arent my style of writingbut I just had these floatingaround and thought I'd share them here. It was supposedtoo be more forceful with possibleS&M but I toned it down lol.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
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How old is this "Daddy" guy? Just really curious.

Soft1017Soft1017almost 10 years agoAuthor
In the original story description

Nick was meant to be in his mid-forties. Here I think I imagined him about 10 years younger. After he basically forced himself on her, he was supposedto share her with 4 of his office buddies. I was like uh...no! lol So trust me this is the tamer version.

HoldingStacieDownHoldingStacieDownalmost 10 years ago
Will there be More ?

Good job ! I really like this story.

Black_Dragon_PrincessBlack_Dragon_Princessalmost 10 years ago
I am glad he didn't share her!!!! 5*

HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT HOT sex as usual from you hunny! ;3 We are soooooooooooooo glad you're back too ^^

SensuousEleganceSensuousElegancealmost 10 years ago

I so wish he was my daddy!!!

Soft1017Soft1017almost 10 years agoAuthor
Lmao

Me tooooo! Me to! lol Thanks for the comments.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
love

Really love the way you write! SEXY!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Awwww sookie sookie now, this is amazing!!! Would be opposed to doing a sequel or continuing this as a series? I really enjoy this one!!

Soft1017Soft1017over 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comment :)

Right now I'm strictly writing for Amazon, and all my releases will be under the penname SC Edward. I dont think I'll be getting into a sequel for this particular story. This was meant to be a quick read , however I appreciate the support. It's nice to know that after all this time I can still come here and find a comment or two supporting me writing :D. Thank you so much!

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