All Comments on 'Rachel's Summer Vacation'

I love your style of writing. It moves so carefree throughout the story, and might I add your stories are hot! The conversation and flow just seems so real, very well done. If you're really an asst. bank mgr, I see another career choice in your future.

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I loved this story. I just took my first cruise and you totally captured the fantasies I had for it. Your writing has a great combination of build up, flirtatious dialog and good old fucking. I'm off to read the rest of your stories....thanks so much.

I've read all your stories, and they just keep getting better. This is my favorite so far. I say "so far" because I have high hopes for chapter two of this one. Don't make us wait too long.

awesome story, I felt like I was there feeling the sexual tension and release. Very well written, thank you and keep writing.

You are particularly good at including the mundane details, like the shared cab to the beach, that make everything else have a hightened sense of realism. Looking forward to reading your other work.

Liked the set up.

Liked the build up.

Liked the sex.

Enjoyed reading. Thank you.

Great job, when's the next chapter? There are still lots of islands and things they can definitely do.