All Comments on 'Rachel's Weekend'

by hotjohn4321

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oldtwitoldtwitover 5 years ago
oh Good one

Oh this was good fast well described sex ( I love that ) and quite well thought out plot, just needs to re read and alter the 2nd page and sort out the grammer , you got carried away with all the sex and miss typed I'm sure.

Cruiser1088Cruiser1088over 1 year ago
Hoping for more

I was thinking he outright breakup with her daughter and tell her he’s dating her mom or they will be married soon……

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