All Comments on 'Radiant Flower: A Brothers Romance'

I enjoyed this very much. It was well written and sounded like it could have actually happened.

I'll never understand what possesses some of you to write stories in present tense. It sucks. Good writers will tell you to not do it. So why do it?

The mindless illiterate bots on here won't care though.

Only the very beginning and the very end are in present tense. I did that since most of the story is a flashback. I wanted to be able to easily distinguish between the present and the past. If you don't like it, that's fine. I thought it worked.

That was one of the best stories I have ever read, and it is probably more common than one would think.

Great Job

Very passionate story

It was so sweet yet immensely erotic at the same time. I can only wish I had something so special like this. Story structure was fine but as others pointed out you might want to clarify tenses so as to keep readers understanding in what's happened and what's happening. Please consider continuing more.

Truly wonderful, caring, hot, love story ! Loved it and I'm sorry it ended !

Beautiful story well written

Over all a good one. I am not too fond of the "baby" and "sweetheart" terms between men. but I love man to man sex. Brothers can be really good.