by coaster2
Well written, and I love the slow build up, the character evolution, and your skill at weaving images with words borders on sheer genius. I look forward to the next chapter!
I would say though that except for the problem of the picture taking everything is to easy on the romantic side
I like this story though I can't understand the questions he has regarding his uncle's wealth. Solving the 'mystery' came up in both chapters so far. WTF, no mystery here, he used the radio, duh. Potential unnecessary plot complication
Good work as usual Coaster!
Great story, the mystery of his uncles inheritance left to him and now the reluctance of Tish to be photographed is creating quite an interesting story. So far it is a 5 star story