All Comments on 'Rae Ch. 01'

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mekaky about 14 years ago

More!

Great start, can't wait to read more!

love4811 about 14 years ago

Nice

Please continue. You have my curiosity piqued.

grunabona about 14 years ago

*****

Nice start.

shereads38 about 14 years ago

Really Good Start!

I would love to know where this is going. Please update soon!

Anonymousabout 14 years ago

Nice

Great start please continue.

Anonymousabout 14 years ago

Great!

This is totally cute! I hope you can add another chapter soon!

Anonymousabout 14 years ago

nice beginner.

cantfightfate about 14 years ago

Good start

Looking forward to more.

Anonymousabout 14 years ago

Really Good Start

Don't make us wait too long on the next chapters....PLEASE!!!!! :-)

ChocolateDreams about 14 years agoAuthor

Glad and happy for feedback :)

For my first story I'm glad people seem to like the first chapter as I know it is frustrating when you read one part and then have to wait forever for another instalment I will try not to do that. Chapter 2 is written and submitted just waiting for it to be approved and then it will be with you :) thanks again for any feedback it is much appreciated!

luv_romance about 14 years ago

nice start

i am glad you hate slow installment. i can't wait for the next chapter. nice start though. :) continue please...

THELOVELY1GLO about 13 years ago

Smooth

Cool and straight to the point. Slow build up is more powerful.

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If anyone is still interested and hanging in there... hope the amended version of Rae goes down well! Apologies for the wait! Just a girl trying to write stories for others to enjoy :)

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