All Comments on 'Ragdoll Ch. 01'

by CapriciousRain

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pobearmanpobearmanabout 11 years ago
Loved the story

I loved your story, well written and arousing. Looking forward to the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Excellent Start!

Looking forward to reading more. I must say though that only one very minor detail seemed off, based on personal experience being fucked when you aren’t ready is excruciatingly painful and (I was told by my partner later) it’s also painful to a degree for the man. Fortunately these occasions have been very rare in my life. It can happen when your body hasn’t aligned with what your brain is ready for, or as in your story when the other partner is being a jerk, sadly it’s also common with rape not that the rapist cares. It’s probably part of what they’re aiming for.

Tess (UK)

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