All Comments on 'Rail Pleasure'

I enjoyed this from a first-time author. So simply told and so plausible. Looking forward to the sequel.

Havent been on the Enterprise for years N I R should give you a concession fare for your great publicity, now where is my rail timetable

This was very nice, but I would have liked to see some dialogue. I think it would have made your story even better. I also think it would have made her "last statement" more memorable at the end.