All Comments on 'Railroaded'

This is a stunning piece of writing showcasing the bond between a fully consensual master : slave relationship. All of the fantasies shared or otherwise between this couple, the trust and love between them is palpable. You set the scene very well making it easy to visualise everything.

I’ll admit that for me it reached very rocky ground when she started to cry, actively reminding myself that this is meant to be a fantasy. I want to believe that they have safe words, I could never cope with TPE. So from my perspective it would have been better if he queried her status/ colour. It does intrude a little on the scene BUT emotional well-being is as important or possibly more important as physical well-being. After all physical wounds are generally visible, emotional wounds not so much.

Tess (UK)