All Comments on 'Rain Falls Ch. 05'

I'm confused at times about the characters actions like Rain buying cowboy boots b/c he needed them to go to C&W bars to turn tricks there. but Eric doesn't want him to do it anymore. Does he intend to just ignore that? I'm not in favor of control freaks, trust me. But, I am in favor of a hand up, esp. if it is to take someone out of a potentially deaadly profession. Too much risk and I can understand a sig. other not wanting to sleep with someone prostituting themselves. Frankly, I'm shocked he'd sleep without protection with someone he guesses has slept with more than 100 men and certainly didn't have money to get tested. I'd like to see that be one of the first things they go do.

I keep having this teasing feeling at the edge of my mind wondering if you're ever gonna turn this supernatural. Not the obvious vampire thing. Eric shows more of the traditional werewolf personality. The increased body heat, the possessive nature, the biting, etc. Just a thought.

Look forward to more. thanks for posting daily.

this is a great story and i love your style of writing

however i must admit that i enjoy your story in three parts instead of seven. Simply for the fact that a couple of pages each time drives me crazy. lol What saves my sanity is that you post the following chapter very quickly. But I personally enjoy the three chapters better.

Thanks for sharing

Because it was the early 80s. X was legal, cowboy boots in Dallas were a staple, and AIDS was not a household word.

Another amazing chapter. I must say I agree with Harry. I like that you posyt!quickly but I like the meatier chapters better. I love the way this story is progressing and the love is building. 😁

reading some of the other comments I feel that some people are forgetting the fact that this is a work of fiction and therefore you can decide how you want to portray the both setting and the characters you are creating ,I like your writing style and the characters and I can't wait to read the next chapter

I adore this story. Your a great writer. The X scene took me back (lol)..ahhh good times...

I really like the pace of this story, its soft tender, smooth from one line to another, the emotions come across clearly there's no forcing of the characters but each of them are slowly revealing and opening themselves, like soft rain

Still worried about Eric. Committed to Rain. He'll survive.