All Comments on 'Rainy Days and Fantasies Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
More please

I love the combination of poetry and story. I want to know whether they're going to get it on. Finish it soon please.

thewordsmith2590thewordsmith2590almost 17 years ago
Well done!

Extremely sensuous, well-written! I greatly enjoyed the interspersed poetry. And do I detect shades of "Story of O" in that fantasy about the commanding, dismissive older man? I can't wait for the next installment!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Different and Well Done

A clever combination of prose and poetry--both well done. More from this writer would be welcome.

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