by SallyFreeandEasy
I love the combination of poetry and story. I want to know whether they're going to get it on. Finish it soon please.
Extremely sensuous, well-written! I greatly enjoyed the interspersed poetry. And do I detect shades of "Story of O" in that fantasy about the commanding, dismissive older man? I can't wait for the next installment!
A clever combination of prose and poetry--both well done. More from this writer would be welcome.