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He grabbed my hand and pulled me along the corridor. 918, 920, 922, I counted off the rooms as he dragged me towards my fate. Outside our room we embraced again, our kisses urgent and needful, our hearts beating like drums.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousabout 16 years agoA clever combination of prose and poetry--both well done. More from this writer would be welcome.
thewordsmith2590almost 17 years agoExtremely sensuous, well-written! I greatly enjoyed the interspersed poetry. And do I detect shades of "Story of O" in that fantasy about the commanding, dismissive older man? I can't wait for the next installment!
Anonymousalmost 17 years agoI love the combination of poetry and story. I want to know whether they're going to get it on. Finish it soon please.
