All Comments on 'Randy's Slutty TrailerTrash Wife Ch. 06'

by TeresaJ

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Poorly Written + Poor Story Line = Forget This!

I've never seen a "writer" with such little skill persist in posting such appallingly bad “stories.” You’d think this “writer” would learn, but there has been no improvement in this chapter of her story...or anything else she’s posted.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
what happened?

I thought the story started off really hot, but what happened? Last chapter sounded like an NPR report about rape and abuse.

This is erotic? Jeezus.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
good stuff

keep going , have him leave the room take it to the max!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
good story!!

My wife and I are really getting off on where this is going and we both hope that you continue with more stories, We are really hopeing that she gets turned into a coke whore before you are though with her!!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
I hope she isn't getting in over her head

She could wind up is a Mexican whore house fucking everything that comes through the door.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Worst

One of the worst story series ever posted in LW. Try it with Jamaal’s slutty ghetto bitch, or Pedro’s slutty barrio puta. Let’s try to be inclusive here in LW.

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