All Comments on 'Ranger Chronicles Ep. 01'

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kuhpa01kuhpa01about 6 years ago
Good story, needs editing

Overall, this was a good story, nice plot, good action scenes in both the battle and the sex arena. The build up was good, laying the groundwork for an epic adventure.

But, the lack of an editor shows clearly, and at times the mistakes were quite distracting from the story.

The ending was a real cliff-hanger. Four Stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Great story, I hope it's just the first of many more chapters.

ItalianBoarItalianBoarabout 6 years ago
Really enjoyed it

Very nice story, I was automatically looking for the next chapter.

I wouldn't have minded reading through him banging his orc lasses, no matter how much longer it got. But again, very good story.

Looking forward for the continuation of this.

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