by DarkVader
I like the concept. It is unique and I want to read more.
... what's not to like? Very well done -- thank you. More like it, please -- five stars.
Love the premise and the beginning. I like how you're getting into her mind at the humiliation and fear. Just don't take it too fast. Take it slow and inch her way down the rabbit hole of degradation.
Looking forward to more.
You kept interest and kept in the realm of actual possibility in the here and now. If I had to guess, next steps will be pushing limits to see where she wil willing to go without too much proding...