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Anonymousover 12 years agoYou have tense issues.
Instead of ate you use eat when the rest of the sentence is past tense. It happens in several sentences.
Sparkedover 16 years agoWhat romance?
That is not romance. It is a poor man who loves a slut who apparently dosen't love him.
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