All Comments on 'Rapunzel's Gift'

by Akito01

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gemsy21gemsy21over 20 years ago
different

this is really different to the other stories i have read on here. i really enjoyed this story, very imaginative, you have a lot of talent.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Mmm

That was simply beautiful. You have a very talented voice and style. Literary and erotic.

paradox167paradox167almost 16 years ago
Great stuff

Thanks Akito01,for this story it was really sensitive.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

This was a really sweet and well-written story but I think it ended far too abrubtly. In one of the versions Rapunzel and the Prince do consumate their love in the tower and the Witch discovers their affair by the ensuing pregnancy. I would have been much more satisfied with that ending, sorry.

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