All Comments on 'Raquel's Lover'

Dr. needs a ass kicking, kids need help, husband needs someone who loves him, not a stupid, shallow bitch.

Sorry, this started off with good potential - but after a while it became boring, making the spelling and grammar errors really stand out. It lacked warmth and altho I did read to the end, it was a struggle. I do hope that you will continue to write stories, but I think you would find a volunteer author very helpful. good luck, and thanks for sharing your story!