All Comments on 'Raspberry'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Thank you for the story...

...it was excellent! And I see that I'm not the only one to vote 5stars on it.

I've always felt that ponygirl/petgirl stories were under-represented here; please write more -- a follow-up and/or new.

CaedyCaedyalmost 12 years ago
Such a wonderful story.

Raspberry is a very lucky pony. I look forward to seeing what happens between Bella and Raspberry and ultimately what becomes of Bella :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Superb!

Thank you for this absolutely superb story, The finely honed psychologic build-up is very erotic. As it is, the story is delightful in itself, but a continuation building on Bella's further evolution towards her - predictable - final decision to change would be, I am sure, equally gratifying.

Again, congratulations! And please continue writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

another great story with no ending, just be bad..

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