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Bella stood in place for a moment, not reacting to the layer of sweat and secretions that now stained the entire front of her outfit. The blush on her face was back at full strength, leaving her the stunning resemblance of a tomato. Then, without another word, or even another look at pony and trainer, she turned around, and shakily walked towards the road. Nick peered sideways towards the cart. In the seat where the girl had been sitting, he could almost swear he could see a tiny puddle of juices. "I guess raspberry isn't the only frisky one." he said with a small chuckle.
Then he turned backwards to where raspberry stood behind him, the semblance of a pleased grin showing behind her bright red gag."You made a new friend, huh?" He said playfully, raising a hand towards the pony's soft cheek. Raspberry responded by lifting her head back happily, taking in the open air one last time for the night. "Come on, let's get you home."
Then Nick led Raspberry back into her stall for the night.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 10 years agoThank you for this absolutely superb story, The finely honed psychologic build-up is very erotic. As it is, the story is delightful in itself, but a continuation building on Bella's further evolution towards her - predictable - final decision to change would be, I am sure, equally gratifying.
Again, congratulations! And please continue writing.
Caedyalmost 12 years agoRaspberry is a very lucky pony. I look forward to seeing what happens between Bella and Raspberry and ultimately what becomes of Bella :)
Anonymousalmost 12 years ago...it was excellent! And I see that I'm not the only one to vote 5stars on it.
I've always felt that ponygirl/petgirl stories were under-represented here; please write more -- a follow-up and/or new.
