All Comments on 'Rather be Lucky than Good Ch. 03'

That was fun. Love the pace. Please submit more. You are breath of fresh air.

I was hoping you would finish the story, about given up. It was a fun read and I hope made folks realize they shouldn't count us old guys down and out before our time.

Thanks Again!

Great writing with a seriously fun story line and some excellent characters, so damn enjoyable to read (both times)!!

BRAVO!!

Well done Old Man, great story about our little community. Duluth Police have great stories (stand off, female officer shot in the leg. SWAT kills man, ballistics prove female officers supervisor shot her durning the scramble for cover. And don't mention the infamous SPEED TRAPS.

Dave,

You're not old. You're awesome and this 28 year old hot girl thinks you're off the chain. Age is a state of mind. You have teen age creativity and this was just a sweet story. I gave you another five. hugs, Randi.

Loved and respected the way you told your story ...

I've read this story half a dozen times and enjoyed it every time. You are a great story teller and please continue your writing. I look forward to your next story.

I am a reader who enjoyed your flight of fantasy enough to recommend that you continue writing. Thanks for your effort...slowrdr@aol.com

and it only took a month, TK U MLJ LV NV

It was a fun read.

Loved the story and the way it was told. Even with the seriousness of what was going on, the humor was right there. I hope you are encouraged with the response and scores this story got, to do some more writing. I enjoy reading and don't need page after page of cut and paste sex to be entertained. So glad I stumbled on this story and looking forward to your next endeavor. Thanks

Fantastic story, totally believable. I wish you’d write some more!

*****Very entertaining read. Thanks for sharing.

I think . No I Know I liked it But you haven't written here in about 6 years.. Nuts... I'd say plz come back. But I think that time might have passed. So hope your ok and carry on.. gd lk. GDBLS. 🤷🤷👍👍💯🙄🤔😉👍👍

WOW.....Just WOW....you are a excellent story teller *5*

Looking forward to more stories?