All Comments on 'Raven Ch. 02'

Enough said.

You got to keep this story going it just keeps getting better

Damn this was hotter then the first one.

Please Let There Be More. I Really enjoy how this story is going.

How about more of Raven, et al. This is really great. Highly enjoyable!!!

make a new raven I love this I didn't think there would be a new one but there was please oh please start on a new chapter this is a really good story

I think this story could be a very longone ,writing is very good,very good story keeps you coming back for more ... you have somthing here. Run with it ending always make you wonder whats next..i would say some one has writing skills here .keep up good work,thanks very,enjoyable

I really like this story. I hope theres more to come real soon.

*gets on her knees and begs* please write more! I absolutely adore these characters! And the thought of Cody being fucked by all three girls!

Excellent story. Please continue this story. Maybe have Helena and Gigi get pregnant, Cody marries either girl preferably Helena , they all live together happily ever after raising their kids.

This is simply awesome, really hot and sexy and not too short.

Even if you don't add to it, it is a great story, but if you could add 'one more summers night' to it, it would be even better.

Go on, you know you want to. And judging by other comments, I'm not the only one who wants at least one more chapter,

So please, just do it for heavens sake ! Thanks :o)))

I've read hundreds of stories only the second series I've ever commented on....I love it plz plz plz write more

This is one of the best I've ever read desperate to read more, you could get at least two more chapters, PLEASE.

for the love of god! We need part 3! Please before I loose my sanity!

Like he said vvvvvvv we need part III. Do NOT leave me hanging with a hot redhead joining them. SHIT!!

Wonderful....please chapter 3

thank you...

With this good base for it you should make a ten or so part series. Great story.

I know it's been five years but you stopped right when it was getting to the good stuff!!

I wonder if any of you ever check back to see if I have read your comments. I used to, regularly, and I sincerely apologize for not answering many of you.

That being said, there is a good reason for much of the delay,. Actually, TWO good reasons.

First, I got a virus that wiped out 100% of my story files and work. While I can download any of the stories already posted, any chapters to follow were lost. Plots, notes - all of that - gone for good. So I am rebuilding from scratch. As I've written over 1600 stories (I do this professionally folks) I can't remember all the details. So if something seems off to you, understand that the original ideas are lost and I'm making up the next parts on the fly.

Second - very important - I got sick. VERY sick. As in 3 heart attacks and something even more (and permanently) debilitating. While I am fairly okay now, I am not - and likely never WILL be - at my old levels again. That being said, I still have nearly 600 pieces out here and have yet to miss a year without a new piece. I am hoping 2018 will have much more output from me. As I type this, I am nearly done a new piece, so that bears well on future efforts.

Feel free to E-Mail me if there's something you might want. PLEASE vote. Message me on the Forum. I need good stuff in my life, it keeps me going - seriously.

Thanks for reading and giving me a career. Best to all of you.

BrettJ in Canada - May 2018

You should eventually make it to where he knocks all 3up.

Ch. 2 wasn't even half as good as Ch. 1. Sad. Sequels are almost NEVER as good.

This story is a prime example.

Please continue this story. I truly enjoyed it and hope you will continue with it.

Not much else to say.

This chapter was not very good,, with his girlfriend and sister doing it together,, this wasn’t in my opinion to be in this category,, the first one was way better

I liked the story very much but I totally loved the ending to this one. Of course, it wouldn't hurt to have another chapter since this chapter read like a lead-in to the next one.