All Comments on 'Raven of the City: A Christmas Tale'

by sojournerwolf

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
buchered

you had a good story going for a while but the last part was just disgusting, a real turn-off. the imagery there was uneccesarily disgusting. plus it should have been in the horror section.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
From one writer to another....

Not bad for a tale of a succubus.

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