All Comments on 'Raven Walks Ch. 23'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great!

I am sad to see this story end...it was so good..but i feel there will be more.someday..lol..loved it!!!!thank u!

reverendaholicreverendaholicalmost 14 years ago
Fizzled out

In the first few chapters this story looked promising. Then it lost anytype of story line as everyone fucked everyone. The story was a good concept but lost behind the constant fucking. I mean what character didn't fuck two or more people? I know this is an erotic site but 23 chapters of tons of sex and very little plot got old.

frosty_hore8frosty_hore8over 13 years ago
thank you.....

different to the more romantic non-human genre i usually read, still found it enjoyable. would be nice for the tale to continue, now they are on their way to europe? ;0)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Loved it!!

Totally enjoyed it. Must find the next series!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

So totally loved it! The way every chapter ends with "Raven walks" and how the last chapter ends with "Ginger walks" deserves applause. Superb series!! Waiting for another one!!

OmniferisOmniferisover 11 years ago
awsome

i loved this story. i really do hope you do a follow up on their adventures

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