by StarrLust69
I am sad to see this story end...it was so good..but i feel there will be more.someday..lol..loved it!!!!thank u!
In the first few chapters this story looked promising. Then it lost anytype of story line as everyone fucked everyone. The story was a good concept but lost behind the constant fucking. I mean what character didn't fuck two or more people? I know this is an erotic site but 23 chapters of tons of sex and very little plot got old.
different to the more romantic non-human genre i usually read, still found it enjoyable. would be nice for the tale to continue, now they are on their way to europe? ;0)
So totally loved it! The way every chapter ends with "Raven walks" and how the last chapter ends with "Ginger walks" deserves applause. Superb series!! Waiting for another one!!
i loved this story. i really do hope you do a follow up on their adventures