by Belle_in_south
An excellent and moving finale to a lovely series. Not only is the sex exciting but all the characters are real. There's not a cardboard cut-out even in the smallest detail. Passionate and wonderfully written.
I truly loved how you ended the story. Including how the two children looked like they were going to marry in the future. I very wonderful story.
You did an excellent job with this story. Wonderful characters that I really cared about and a great ending. Thanks for sharing your many talents and looking forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your efforts!
A wonderful lovestory with strong emotions. I loved it from the very start to the kind o' confusing end ;-) . Hope to find some more stories of Belle-in-South.
Wow... I stayed up way too late. I just was wrapped up in the story so much that I had to finish it. Way to go. Your characters are beautiful and real. I really feel like I was there. I hope to read more from you!!
I loved it. It was superb, just i got really confused at the end of the story. I'll try to see if i can understand it if i read it over.
I guess ill explain the ending, to my understanding, to those who are confused. Lila and Maggy ended together obviously, Maggy had a daughter with Lila's consent(the father would probably be Lila's father or Quinn), Van gorr on the other hand ended up with Elaine(Maggie's former maid, best friend etc.)and these two had a son...and so thats about it...
A bit confusing the last few paragraphs but over all a very well written story. Thanks J