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Click hereErin grew to love and sometimes even preferred anal sex without any lubricant, especially if she was in a wicked mood, just so that Faith could always have the fun of cleaning her afterward. Faith would sometimes then request and submit to a good anal pounding herself just to exact some revenge of her own, not letting Erin free until every drop of semen had been recovered and her ass made squeaky clean with her probing tongue.
We reluctantly dressed around Noon and faced the challenges of a new day and an entirely new life together, each sharing ourselves equally. It was all too soon time to go, but there were new cities to see and new faces to play for. We held each others hand tightly, lost together in our love, and waited for the Band bus to come and pick us up for the start of an entirely new adventure.
Same complaint as most other people, the ending didn’t fit the story and tbh was utterly improbable, confirmed lesbians of many years don’t suddenly decide to have oral and penetrative sex with a guy, that’s just a convenient plot device that seems plausible to a certain sort of straight man (author?). Sad, but a good story - if a bit soap opera-esque until that point, the story would have worked much better if he’d met Erin’s straight big sister or some such and reunited the band at the same point. 4⭐️
Liked it up until the ending as well, I was also not as generous. 3* as the ending didn't fit at all. Erin and Faith should have been together and the MC should have moved on.
"It was five stars...
until the scene at the hotel after the last concert. Still, I enjoyed it so much up to that point that I rated it a five. Why didn't I enjoy the ending? For me, it didn't fit the rest of the story. Of course, reasonable people may disagree."
I agree completely!!!!!!
until the scene at the hotel after the last concert. Still, I enjoyed it so much up to that point that I rated it a five. Why didn't I enjoy the ending? For me, it didn't fit the rest of the story. Of course, reasonable people may disagree.