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Anonymousalmost 15 years agocontinues to be excellent
Interesting work, and well-written. It was a thoughtful gesture to pull Navia into the recovery effort as an ally instead of the more obvious "woman scorned" scenario. Looking forward to the next chapter.
-- KK in Texas
PennLadyalmost 15 years agoI like it
I second the previous comment -- Navia's reaction is wonderful, as is Rayne's to Navia. Navia may need a sequel. ;)
cantfightfatealmost 15 years agoOne of your better chapters
Much, much, MUCH better than your last few. Well done.
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