All Comments on 'Re-Born On The Fourth Of July'

PLEASE put a disclaimer when there is lesbian/gay themes, wouldn't have read this had I known. Does nothing for me.

What, you care so little about your own story you couldn't include a chapter number to indicate this wasn't a complete story?

I think your first contribution is hot. I look forward to your other chapters. Please continue.

the same thing happened to me a few years back reading your story i was back there really got me and my wife hot have to go wifey is requesting it lol

There's a nice structure to this, and I like the overt style. The quickie BJ for hubby at the start was fun. I think it would be neat to add a little more description of people's bodies. I hope you're headed towards some kind of guy on guy dare scene. One of them strips maybe, some mutual masturbation, or perhaps you and your hubby sharing the other guy's cock.